The dream giver

The Dream Giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.

We know we have done this when:

• We have painted a picture with our words.
• Made the reader want to read on.
• Used more than 4 similes.
• Used lots of adjectives to make our writing more interesting.

Extra things that we need to keep an eye on…..

Punctuation.

Capital letters and full stops.

Click on the URL below and rewatch the Dream Giver short clip.

You can rewind and stop and start as much as you need to. This will help you when you need to describe the Dream Giver.

The Dream Giver

Go onto the padlet and brainstorm some ideas to help you. Padlet

Start your writing here.

I'm a dream giver I do it for my  job but I don’t  get.Any money because everyone is asleep every day I wake up I hope.For a proper house but I can’t I get no money.To buy a good one i don’t  dream because i’m the only. Dream giver to exist my house is all broken my rent is.Zero dollers so I  I can live in it  is very cold I am very old and lonely I go.To a Orphanage there is this person who wants toBe a. Ballerina so I make it their dream this person wants to be a astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being inThe Dream Giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.

We know we have done this when:

• We have painted a picture with our words.
• Made the reader want to read on.
• Used more than 4 similes.
• Used lots of adjectives to make our writing more interesting.

Extra things that we need to keep an eye on…..

Punctuation.

Capital letters and full stops.

Click on the URL below and rewatch the Dream Giver short clip.

You can rewind and stop and start as much as you need to. This will help you when you need to describe the Dream Giver.

The Dream Giver

Go onto the padlet and brainstorm some ideas to help you. Padlet

Start your writing here.

I'm a dream giver I do it for my  job but I don’t  get.Any money because everyone is asleep every day I wake up I hope.For a proper house but I can’t I get no money.To buy a good one i don’t  dream because i’m the only. Dream giver to exist my house is all broken my rent is.Zero dollers so I  I can live in it  is very cold I am very old and lonely I go.To a Orphanage there is this person who wants toBe a. Ballerina so I make it their dream this person wants to be a astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being in The Dream Giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.

We know we have done this when:

• We have painted a picture with our words.
• Made the reader want to read on.
• Used more than 4 similes.
• Used lots of adjectives to make our writing more interesting.

Extra things that we need to keep an eye on…..

Punctuation.

Capital letters and full stops.

Click on the URL below and rewatch the Dream Giver short clip.

You can rewind and stop and start as much as you need to. This will help you when you need to describe the Dream Giver.

The Dream Giver

Go onto the padlet and brainstorm some ideas to help you. Padlet

Start your writing here.

I'm a dream giver I do it for my  job but I don’t  get.Any money because everyone is asleep every day I wake up I hope.For a proper house but I can’t I get no money.To buy a good one i don’t  dream because i’m the only. Dream giver to exist my house is all broken my rent is.Zero dollars so I  I can live in it  is very cold I am very old and lonely I go.To a Orphanage there is this person who wants to Be a. Ballerina so I make it their dream this person wants to be a astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being in astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being in