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Wednesday, August 31, 2016

My Mihi

WAL our mihi
We know we have done this when we have spoken clearly and confidently.


Monday, August 29, 2016

The dream giver

The Dream Giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.
We know we have done this when:
  • We have painted a picture with our words.
  • Made the reader want to read on.
  • Used more than 4 similes.
  • Used lots of adjectives to make our writing more interesting.

Extra things that we need to keep an eye on…..
Punctuation.
Capital letters and full stops.

Click on the URL below and rewatch the Dream Giver short clip.
You can rewind and stop and start as much as you need to. This will help you when you need to describe the Dream Giver.


Go onto the padlet and brainstorm some ideas to help you. Padlet



Start your writing here.
I'm a dream giver I do it for my  job but I don’t  get.Any money because everyone is asleep every day I wake up I hope.For a proper house but I can’t I get no money.To buy a good one i don’t  dream because i’m the only. Dream giver to exist my house is all broken my rent is.Zero dollers so I  I can live in it  is very cold I am very old and lonely I go.To a Orphanage there is this person who wants toBe a. Ballerina so I make it their dream this person wants to be a astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being inThe Dream Giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.
We know we have done this when:
  • We have painted a picture with our words.
  • Made the reader want to read on.
  • Used more than 4 similes.
  • Used lots of adjectives to make our writing more interesting.

Extra things that we need to keep an eye on…..
Punctuation.
Capital letters and full stops.

Click on the URL below and rewatch the Dream Giver short clip.
You can rewind and stop and start as much as you need to. This will help you when you need to describe the Dream Giver.


Go onto the padlet and brainstorm some ideas to help you. Padlet



Start your writing here.
I'm a dream giver I do it for my  job but I don’t  get.Any money because everyone is asleep every day I wake up I hope.For a proper house but I can’t I get no money.To buy a good one i don’t  dream because i’m the only. Dream giver to exist my house is all broken my rent is.Zero dollers so I  I can live in it  is very cold I am very old and lonely I go.To a Orphanage there is this person who wants toBe a. Ballerina so I make it their dream this person wants to be a astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being in The Dream Giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.
We know we have done this when:
  • We have painted a picture with our words.
  • Made the reader want to read on.
  • Used more than 4 similes.
  • Used lots of adjectives to make our writing more interesting.

Extra things that we need to keep an eye on…..
Punctuation.
Capital letters and full stops.

Click on the URL below and rewatch the Dream Giver short clip.
You can rewind and stop and start as much as you need to. This will help you when you need to describe the Dream Giver.


Go onto the padlet and brainstorm some ideas to help you. Padlet



Start your writing here.
I'm a dream giver I do it for my  job but I don’t  get.Any money because everyone is asleep every day I wake up I hope.For a proper house but I can’t I get no money.To buy a good one i don’t  dream because i’m the only. Dream giver to exist my house is all broken my rent is.Zero dollars so I  I can live in it  is very cold I am very old and lonely I go.To a Orphanage there is this person who wants to Be a. Ballerina so I make it their dream this person wants to be a astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being in astronaut I make it their dream. and I do it to more kids and There is a kid who wants to be a music man. I  crack an egg on a kid who want’s to dream to be a astronaut kicks an egg on this scary book.He is dreaming of being in

Rio Rainforest


I went exploring in the Rio Rainforest it look like.The animal olympics were going to begin the black panther. Was like usain bolt the panther was one of the fastest thing in the forest.The smell was salty probably because of the diving salt water crocodiles.OH look at that sloth doing gymnastics it is the animal olympics.OH THERE IS MORE STUFF the pole vaulting fox is so cool there is a whigtlifting Armadido.Is so cool wait what is that.Teiper doing oh it is doing dicis.the lightling came it was as blue as a chyristl boom thunder came.The animal oympics begain the animal’s were doing sport’s.The sloth was on a vine as green as toxic waste.Omg there is a snake on my.Back AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.Oh it was just a vine I can feel something was crawling.On my leg I srcamed it was the most posienes spider on the earth I.Start to panic I am so scaed I cry I get a leaf it go’s on it. I throw the leaf away something bit me it was a bird pecking at my leg a.Komodo dragon ate it and it took a big bit at my leg I hop to.My tree hut and I try to rest.THE END                      

Friday, August 12, 2016

WALT use videos to make our writing better.

We know we can when we have done these things
THE SWITCH
BY JAMES

I was at the football game it was Portugal vs England Ronaldo had the ball he shoots he scores.He ran and hit the ball boys head.The next day I woke up in Ronaldo’s body and he woke up in my body ..I go to the ball boys mum and dad I was like what is going on here . I’m Cristiano Ronaldo his sister rolled his eyes . The boy was bad at football and it looked like Ronaldo was bad at football. His coach was laughing at him .So he trained and the boy became good at football it was the finals . England vs Portugal ,Ronaldo had the ball he got a goal. “Score “ everyone yelled. Ronaldo and the boy went for the ball.They bang heads and went back to their own bodys.



Thursday, August 11, 2016