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Friday, September 22, 2017

The piano

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing from the old man’s point of view as he recalls his memories.



I am a wrinkly old man they call me creepy Joe but I'm good at the piano.I’m going to play my piano today I'm playing it really good at it. As I look beside me I see my wife's ghost I remember the day she died. It was sad we were walking on the bridge to go on a cruise ship. As we were going on the ship she slipped over and broke her leg and. Fell into the water and drowned a tear dropped on one of the keys .It made it sound bad I was being booed at. Then I remember world war 1 as me and my brother hid behind a fallen house. My brother went to go and shoot the other people but he was late to the trigger. “NOOOOOOOOO” I scream and cry. I went rage and got my minigun “ARGHHHHHHHH” I grunt and. I won the war and meet my wife and had the tragic cruise accident. Now I remember when I got my first birthday present. It was a wooden scooter horse. I was so happy that when I played with it was like I was in a horse race. Yippee I yelled then my dad yelled at me and gave me a hiding.I cried so hard I went to the music shop with my mum. we got a little kid piano toy I was so happy it was my second toy I ever got because my family were poor. when I was older I got a job at the music shop because I worked there I got half price on everything I had I brought a thousand dollars with me. The rest of my money was at my house I went to buy a one thousand dollar piano and I remembered. That I could get two I put one in my car and get the other one shipped. One for me and one for my wife. My grandson comes over to play the piano.I fall of my chair and die and my grandson was lonely.                          

Te Ngahere

WAL about the ngahere the rakau the kararehe the manu and the risks to the forest