Friday, April 7, 2017
WALT Write a narrative.
I’m just a normal cloud I depart from my cloud family. I came from the sea I was made by a mad scientist. I’m meant to help people in need.I’m not just a normal cloud I'm a cloud that spies, on people who mug people and bullied people. I go through the traffic lights it makes it look like it is my heart but it's not. I go in between two buildings but the more I saw the more I did.I get electrocuted a dog barks at me so I move out and ,the more I did the more I became. I saw a fire the firefighters were trying so hard but they never succeed so I help the fire was gone in a second.I was a cloud made of more the end.
Friday, March 31, 2017
Friday, March 24, 2017
Thursday, March 23, 2017
WALT Vary my sentence beginnings, structure and lengthTHE ARCTIC CIRCLE
I am a Eskimo I go outside of my cosy house.
I go to twist this metal rod on the āporo tree. I’m 99 years old and my birthday is tomorrow and I will be 100. I see a yellow box I touch it and it fires me into the āporo tree, heaps of āporo come on the tree.
I get greedy the box starts moving to my stupid neighbours house. I start to get into a deep run my neighbours comes out and say “HI TOM” then I say “GET AWAY BOB OR I WILL PUNCH YOU IN THE NOGGIN.” I trap the box “HA” I say I jump onto it my hand turns orange I go to walk home.
Pop my foot turns into a box I move my other foot it goes into the box I fall over. I start crawling to Tom's house “TOM HELP ME TOM’’ Tom was laughing pop I was the box now
Thursday, March 16, 2017
One day I was at the washing mat reading a book.I yawned I saw something in the washing machine.
I go for another look it was a sock fish I rubbed my eyes Just to see if I was seeing things, then I opened the washing machine surprising. The water didn’t fall out I hold my breath I see all the lose change seaweed.
I jump in I saw all the sock fish t-shirt squids. I see the glowing fish I swim after it then the fish swims away.
then there was the jean shark I scream but no one can save me. I swim behind a bit of coin seaweed I see the exit. I was swimming so hard it felt like my legs were going to come off. the Shark was going to bite me I close my eyes in my head. I say “this is it i'm doomed” I opened my eyes.
I was on the floor of the washing mat. I had a frown I was going to touch the jeans. A voice said “I think those a mine” I look up I saw a shark man. I go to grab his jeans they try to bite me.