I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi James. A good photo and inclusion of the recipe. If you say something is not the best you must say why and what you think was needed to improve it. Were they too bland, too many vegetables? Would additional mexican spice have improved them?
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Hi James. A good photo and inclusion of the recipe. If you say something is not the best you must say why and what you think was needed to improve it. Were they too bland, too many vegetables? Would additional mexican spice have improved them?
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