I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora, James Alex here from Grey Main School. I like how you have told us what your passion project is. Miharo (Amazing). Next time you could write about what kinds of music there are. Heoi ano taku mo naianei (That's all for now for now) From Alex Co
Kia Ora James. I like how you told us 2 singers/bands you know. Next time you could put a link to one of those songs in. This reminds me of singing radioactive. Do you play an instrument?
Kia Ora James My name is Jazmine from Mamaku 2 at Greymain School. WOW I love the songs that are on your slide But maybe nexted time you should link the writing on your slide
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Kia Ora, James Alex here from Grey Main School. I like how you have told us what your passion project is. Miharo (Amazing). Next time you could write about what kinds of music there are. Heoi ano taku mo naianei (That's all for now for now)
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Kia Ora James. I like how you told us 2 singers/bands you know. Next time you could put a link to one of those songs in. This reminds me of singing radioactive. Do you play an instrument?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora James My name is Jazmine from Mamaku 2 at Greymain School.
ReplyDeleteWOW I love the songs that are on your slide But maybe nexted time you should link the writing on your slide
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