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Friday, August 12, 2016

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THE SWITCH
BY JAMES

I was at the football game it was Portugal vs England Ronaldo had the ball he shoots he scores.He ran and hit the ball boys head.The next day I woke up in Ronaldo’s body and he woke up in my body ..I go to the ball boys mum and dad I was like what is going on here . I’m Cristiano Ronaldo his sister rolled his eyes . The boy was bad at football and it looked like Ronaldo was bad at football. His coach was laughing at him .So he trained and the boy became good at football it was the finals . England vs Portugal ,Ronaldo had the ball he got a goal. “Score “ everyone yelled. Ronaldo and the boy went for the ball.They bang heads and went back to their own bodys.



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  1. Kia ora James WOW! your work is very good how did you think about make this writing and you could tell us more about switching people well good gob bye

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