One day I was sitting down I was so lonely I had nobody. To be my friend I go to a roof top I see a light.So I go to see it I see a candle I went to touch it.OWWWWWWWWWW it brunt my hand it hurt so much I went to my brothers.A cat was comeing I was worried I hide the cat.Got scared of yay I went on too the roof top and I see the candle.Get put out so I rush over there I was too late she was.Gone I was sad then she came back I was happy
Kia Ora James I am Trent from Grey Main School. I like how you have used capital I's. Next time you could work on your spelling. This reminds me of when I kept moving my finger in a candle. Why did you do this for writing? Good Bye
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