I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, June 20, 2019
game of awesome
The biker was hiding from the big monster truck that had a mind of its own he wanted to target this biker because he absolutely hated the biker every time he saw the biker he got angry thought he had found the best hiding spot but suddenly the monster truck smashed through the bikers little shack the biker scared for his life started to pedal really fast on a small kids trike that he found on the side of the road but the monster truck keeped on coming there was no hope for the poor biker out of nowhere this small pebble hit the front wheel of trike it did a flip onto is side and was never seen again and the monster truck went on to find the next target
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Hello James
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described the monster truck maybe next time you could highlight the words that you had to use but overall it was really nice
Sincerely Shontae