tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8854543793042595477.post3380153209412780083..comments2021-09-06T09:19:18.126+12:00Comments on James@Hornby High School: WALT use videos to make our writing better.2024 Blog Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13615564306204625976noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8854543793042595477.post-86675017831096097712016-08-30T14:39:21.058+12:002016-08-30T14:39:21.058+12:00Kia ora James WOW! your work is very good how did ...Kia ora James WOW! your work is very good how did you think about make this writing and you could tell us more about switching people well good gob byeRiccihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04327819263969821710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8854543793042595477.post-85375601277376840562016-08-16T09:22:43.914+12:002016-08-16T09:22:43.914+12:00Kia Ora James, I Think your piece of writing is re...Kia Ora James, I Think your piece of writing is really good, I like how you've made it interesting. It was cool how you switched bodies in the story. Maybe next time you could add maybe more detail in your story but over all your story was very good. Why did you write your story about this? From Ayesha Ayesha https://www.blogger.com/profile/00645274158021643369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8854543793042595477.post-42920547483700941082016-08-15T09:31:24.749+12:002016-08-15T09:31:24.749+12:00Hi James. I like how you switched body's in th...Hi James. I like how you switched body's in this story about Ronaldo and you. Next time you could switch body's with something like a dog or an animal. Who is Ronaldo's sister and why did she roll her eyes? This reminded me of when I was playing soccer and me and Kristan clashed are heads together.Trenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07723458509514955002noreply@blogger.com